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Post subject: Post opinion on what I am writing thanks.
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Ok I am writing a book it's called the continental warriors. Its about a boy Kai. He started off on his journey with nothing, but soon found out why he had to leave home. He is the protector of the gailant scrolls and he carrys two blades. The first is a phoenix blade the other is the galiant blade. He becomes one of the continental warriors after one of his dad's friends past away. His name was kokoru armarachi. He is a koya or a elite fighter of the ishizan clan. He fought along side Haku Hiharu, Kai's dad which served in the war of Tereda for 11 years.
If you want me to write one of the chapters Just tell me and please post your opinions on what i said about my book that is in the process.Thanks. |
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 Thu May 25, 2006 3:51 pm |
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| OK...Sorry to have to put it this way, but your book introduction bites. It lacks any sort of factors that would make it a worthwhile read. |
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| Thu May 25, 2006 4:17 pm |
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| Thats not my Introduction thats just some of the information i put out for you, if you want me to put in my intro i will be happy to. Sorry if I didn't make it clear on what I was writing. So if you want me to just write back again |
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| Thu May 25, 2006 4:27 pm |
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| Fri May 26, 2006 2:30 am |
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| Sorry for coming on a bit strong, kiba. I can be a little...blunt sometimes. As for your intro, go ahead and post it. I'll give it a good read and go from there. |
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| Fri May 26, 2006 5:47 am |
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Sorry I havent been on for awhile. I've been on vacation.Oh heres my intro post opinion.
When the world is at it's end.Only a few choose to fight they are called the Continental warriors. From each clan and tribe one is selected and trained to fight in the war of Tereda. Only a few survived and they were giving the elite title Koya. They then went into hiding, so what they saw was kept secret. People soon forgot of the legendary warriors,but once this happened a kid with a destiny, a boy with a dream stepped forward without hesitation to find out why and how he stepped upon this without any answer of who he was becoming and how he was destined to save the the world like his father before him. With the galiant blade and the friends he will soon have no one will stop the continentals from serving the world they once saved and finally putiing the destruction into it's final slumber.
Sorry for the wait well post opinions good or bad. |
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| Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:49 pm |
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Judging by your general writing skill and grasp of English you portray on this show, everything you write is garbage.
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| Fri Jun 09, 2006 1:35 am |
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| Ok thanks for your opinion. |
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| Fri Jun 09, 2006 1:33 pm |
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